The Taste of Hell
It’s 2:45 am on the 25th of April 1915. I’m so hot. I’m sweating like a waterfall we are very close to shore. My friend and I are at the best place at the back of the landing boat. I’m really pumped but scared at the same time.
We're getting closer and closer to shore. I don’t know what's going to happen. I can’t see anything. It’s pitch black as the moon dipped behind the clouds. Suddenly we all hear a big BOOM!!!! I saw soldiers diving off the landing boat were land on the shore my legs were shaking like a earthquake.
I don’t know what’s going to happen now…….
By Bishop
I am learning to write an interesting recount.
I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.
It can be tricky to the right adjectives for the right sentence.
My buddy can help me by checking my work.
The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.
1 comment:
This is a very descriptive recount. You have chosen your words carefully to add tension to your story. I like your use of short sentences. Good Job !
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